Published 11.05.2018 on subject English by Guest

Dear Sir or Madam

(1)I am responding to your advertisement in the May 1, 2007, issue of the Atlanta Journal Constitution for a full-time salesperson for summer employment. (2)I am very much interested in being considered for this position. (3)It would be really exciting to work in a store that sells clothes for teens.

(4)I am a junior in high school where I am vice president of the Student Government Association, a member of the marching band, and a member of the National Honor Society. (5)Through my participation in these activities and various community service projects, I have learned the importance of personal responsibility, teamwork, and to be committed. (6)I have very few absences from school, and I am always on time. (7)I make good grades and plan to attend college.

(8)My father owns a small variety store, and I have assisted him there for many years. (9)I realize the importance of knowing the merchandise, of custom service, and of company policies.

(10)I would be happy to meet for an interview any afternoon after 3:30. (11)My telephone number is 404 976-8110. (12)I can provide references upon request.

Sincerely yours,


Lilly Lou Strunk What is the BEST way, if any, to revise Sentence (5)? A) Leave the sentence as is. B) Through my participation in these activities and various community service projects, I have learned the importance of personal responsibility, teamwork, and commitment. C) Personal responsibility, teamwork, and to be committed through my participation in these activities and various community service projects are things that I have learned. D) I have learned the importance of personal responsibility, teamwork, and to be committed through my participation in these activities and various community service projects,